Okay, so basically this is a fan fiction about the Jonas brothers. But in order to do this fan fiction there are a couple of things I need from you guys.

1. I need feedback!

2. Characters, if you would like to be in this fan fic then I need your name and a quick description of what you look like and what role you would like to play.

3. If anybody has anything they would like to add please tell me!

I will have chapters where you guys give me the idea and I'll put it into the fiction. I will not be able to update very often but check back when you can because when I am able to get on I will have some amazing updates!

Thanks!

Chapter One
My name is Kacee Newnen. I just turned 14 in December and it wasn't cold. It never is! That's because I live in California! Okay okay, I know stereotypical stupid rich girl from Cali, right. No, actually my family doesn't have alot of money and I get straight A's thank you very much.



Post more later! I have to eat! Tell me if you have any ideas!

Here's my opinion, and I'm being honest so please don't take offense if something I say offends you. The chapter was short and there wasn't a whole lot of details/info in it so I'm not really sure what's going on quite yet. But I am sure more will be revealed as you continue to post more of the fan fic. I'll definitely stick around for more though..just to see what happens.

And I'd love to be in this! My name is Kourtni. I have brown hair, shoulder length, green/brown eyes, and I'm about 5'6". anything else, let me know!

i like it so far! i would love to be in it my name is caiti i'm 14 i have long brown hair with bloud highlites i'm 5'4 and i would like to play nicks gf but anything will do ;-) okay well post more soon please!

Yea, I agree with Kourtni.
Its sounds amazing, but it sounded more like a character description thana chapter

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Originally posted by .sarah.:
Yea, I agree with Kourtni.
Its sounds amazing, but it sounded more like a character description thana chapter

Agreed to the character description thing too.

I can tell that this going to sound good. Also I will def give you alot of feedback, i love reading fan fics.
Also I was woundering if I could be in your fanfic?
My name is Kandece, I have mediumish/longish brown hair with blonde highlights,and brown eyes. I atheltic i love palying softball,soccer and ice hockey and I was wondering if I could Kevin's girlfriend?

i think its good so far! can i be in it? my names Marissa, im about 5'6", 5'7", i have brown hair and eyes and i like basketball and lacrosse, and yea, o and if its possible, id like to be with joe

This seems like a popular fan fic because a lot of people are wanting to be in it. Haha. That's so awesome for the writer though.

sounds good. you probably need a lot more though.
i can be in it. i am Lauren, my eyes are every possible they could be (i really don't have one, i have like 6.=]) i am 5'4,and i love all sports. thats just about it.if you need more tell me.pm or whatev.