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ahh so gooood!
that was such an adorable chapter
the video made me laugh so much, it was so cute!
REALLY cant wait for the new chapter lol
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LOVED IT LAURA!! that was sooo good! i was nearly crying at the beginning of the chapter; it was so sad. but it ended nicely Smiler the video part was so cute! cant wait for the next installment! and yeah, zac and joey need straightening out too.

oh btw, all the best for your finals laura! Smiler

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GGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR


THAT WAS AMAZING....AND THAT WHOLE BOWL-CUT SCENE...I LOVED I5T!
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first day of exams went well, so since i'm in such a good mood and i have the day off tomorrow, you guys get another update tonight.

i'll start writing...
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here's one part, i'll continue writing part two now, but i know you all just HAD to see what happened next. happy reading!

Chapter 21~ Kiss the Girl, part 1

Joe’s POV

Did I actually hold her hand all the way home? Did I kiss her cheek again? Where did this courage come from?

But honestly, I wish I hadn’t done either of those. It was becoming unbearable holding this all in, but it just wasn’t time yet. Something was telling me that it just wasn’t time. It’ll come soon.

I floated all the way back to Imrie and ran into the guys who were in the living room watching Saw 2. Ethan bounced off the couch and ran toward me.

“What happened?”

“How…how you did you know anything was going on?”

“Beka stopped by here before, how else do you think she found you?”

“Oh, well, we’re ok. For real.”

“Are you sure?”

“One hundred percent sure. Don’t worry about it, Ethan. Everything is going to work out.”

Ethan smile, “Glad to hear it, man,” he said as he slapped my shoulder.

“So you and Beka are back to normal?” Piped Joey from the couches.

“Yes, we are. No more huge fights,” I said relieved. It sounded good to be able to say that.

“THANK GOD!” Exclaimed Ben, “I’m so sick of you moping around because you and Beka had a fight.”

I was too happy to think of some clever comeback.

“Ben, Ethan? Either of you guys busy the rest of the night?”

“I’m not, are you, Ethan?”

Ethan shook his head, “Nope.”

“Great, I think it’s time for another special delivery.”

“So wait, you need me to deliver something to Zac?” Asked Joey softly, almost nervous.

“Yea, that’s your job remember?” Said Ethan.

“I know, I’ll text her,” he said as he pulled out his cell.

Why would Joey be so nervous about seeing Zac? Then his words from the gym came flooding back, and I smiled.

It’s about time, Joey. About time…

Zac’s POV

I was doing some crunches inside when my phone started vibrating. I flipped it open and saw I had a new text message:

Delivery tonight
-J

I smiled. I was seeing Joey tonight. But I was still trying to figure things out between us, if there even was anything going on. Was I ready to meet him face to face?

My thoughts were interrupted when Beka walked in through the door.

“Oh my God, I got a call from Ethan a while ago. Is everything ok?”

She smiled slightly, “It is now,” she said softly as she began walking to her room.

“Woah, woah, hang on a sec,” I said stopping her, “That’s it? I don’t get details?”

“I don’t think you want to hear them. Either way, I’m not reliving that ever again, so please spare me.”

“Fine. But, did something happen? I mean…you know…” I said after I noticed the look on Beka’s face.

“What? Between me and Joe? No! Nothing happened,” she said a little too fast.

“Spill, now.”

“Ok fine. He kissed me on the cheek.”

I paused, “That’s it?”

“What do you mean, ‘that’s it’? That’s a lot!”

“Beka, it’s a kiss on the cheek. Big deal.”

“That’s the thing. It feels like a big deal. I can’t get it out of my head.”

“Oh, I see.”

“Yea.”

“Beka, when are you going to admit it to yourself that you like him? Just do us all a favor and say it.”

“Don’t be silly, Zac. I’m happy with Nate.”

“Sure you are. Anyways, I’m going to finish my work out.”

“Ok, I’m actually going to make something to eat.”

“Fine, make me something too, will ya?”

“Sure.”

Beka’s POV

In honor of me killing this stupid diet, I was going to eat something. I know, that sounds so pathetic…

So I went into the kitchen and began to make some Mac ‘N’ Cheese. Something I had been craving for ages. After I was done, I left some on the stove for Zac and made myself a dish. Greedily, I shoved some in my mouth. My eyes closed as the wonderful taste filled my senses. I took another bite, and another, until I cleaned my plate. I washed my plate and began walking back to my room, but something didn’t feel right. My stomach made a funny noise and I clutched it. Then that familiar feeling spread throughout my body. I ran as fast as I could to the bathroom, hoping I would make it before my stomach began to heave. Once I made it to the bathroom, I emptied the contents of my stomach into the toilet.

Uh oh, this was not a good sign.

Zac’s POV

I was finishing up the last of my crunches when I heard Beka in the bathroom, throwing up. Getting up as fast as I could, I ran to the bathroom and was met with Beka wiping her mouth.

“Are you ok?” I asked concerned.

“I’m fine,” she said, “I think the stress of the day and exhaustion just piled up and eating not too healthy food was what did me in.”

“I’m sorry, do you feel better?”

“Yea I do.”

“Do you want me to make you some tea or get you a Ginger Ale or something?”

“No, I think I’m just going to go to bed now. Thanks for the offer though,” she said softly, still obviously not feeling well. Then she walked in her room and shut the door.

At least I won’t have any problems sneaking away. I hopped in the shower and washed off any trace of sweat on me. I had to look decent. After all, I was seeing Joey in a few hours.

Joey’s POV

I was under the bleachers almost an hour early. I just couldn’t sit around and wait for twelve thirty to come.

These new feelings I felt with Zac, they almost scared me. As corny as it sounds, I really never felt like this before. I mean, sure, I’ve been out with many girls, most of them were better looking, more experienced, and funnier than Zac. But Zac, she had something different. Something about her always made my heart race. I had doubted what I was feeling before, but now it all made sense. And I wasn’t holding back what I really felt anymore.

After what seemed like hours, I could see a figure walking on the football field. The person was just who suspected it to be…

“Hey, Joey,” said Zac.

“Hey, Zac,” I said, and we stood there awkwardly.

“So do you have the note?”

“Um yea, here,” I said handing her the note, my voice almost failing me. Snap out of it, Joey.

She looked up at me again, a nervous look in her eyes. I bet mine mirrored the same image.

“Umm,” she said, playing with the note, “I’m gonna go,” she said turning away from me.

“NO!” My mind screamed.

“No!” I said out loud and lunged forward to grab her arm. I spun her towards me, her hair flying everywhere. Her hair was down again, just how I liked it.

Then before she could say a word, I leaned forward and kissed her. I loosed my grip on her arm and gently cupped her soft face with my hands. Zac was definitely not prepared for that, for she did not move a muscle. As quickly as it came, I pulled away, my heart racing faster than ever.

“What do you say to that?” I said looking at her in the eye.

Zac touched her lips delicately, then totally surprising me, wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me. Her lips parted so that she could kiss me even harder. I, of course, happily obliged. And there we were, under the bleachers, kissing intensely. And I couldn’t have been happier.

Zac pulled away, out of breath, “What just happened?”

I flashed my genuine smile, “I kissed you and you kissed me back.”

Zac looked down at her feet and blushed. I brought my hand to her chin and forced her to look at me. When her eyes met mine, she couldn’t hold back her smile. With another smile of my own, I gently pecked her lips again.

“I like you, Zac,” I said as I laced my hands with hers, “I have for some time but I just didn’t know it. Until now, I didn’t believe what I was feeling was real. But it is.”

“I like you too, Joey. For so long. I never would have dreamed you would have ever liked me.”

I brushed her cheek gently with my thumb, “Well, you were dead wrong.”

Zac smiled again, her entire face brightening up.

“Be mine, Zac. I don’t want to be with anyone else,” I said, my voice sounding huskier as I pressed my forehead to hers and put my hands on her waist. When she didn’t answer immediately, I kissed her.

“I don’t…” she started, but I cut her off with another kiss. I was not going to take no for an answer.

“I…” she tried again, but I kissed her again.

Ending the torture, I let her talk, “Yes. Yes, Joey,” she said breathlessly.

“Good,” I said as I kissed her again. Zac was very wobbly at this point, the only reason she was standing was because she was gripping my jacket and I of course was holding her up by her waist.

I don’t remember how long we stayed there, holding each other, kissing, and just being in each other’s presence. But I didn’t care. All that mattered was that I was finally with Zac. And she was mine.


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