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Hey ya'll this is my new ff called 'Maybe I'm Amazed' I hope you guys like it! And tell me what you think! Thanks a bunch!
x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x* Chapter 1 “Kyle, I don’t like it here in the city.” I complained as my best friend Kyle drug me into the crowded sidewalk of Boston’s airport. It was cold, very cold for it to be in September. By the way, I’m Christy. I’m seventeen years old and in three months, I’ll be eighteen. My best friend Kyle, the pest, is twenty. We both grew up in Savannah, Georgia together. I knew from the moment I got on the plane and on my way here to Boston, I would hate it. I could feel it but Kyle and I share a passion for music, that’s why he suggested I come to Berklee College of Music here in Boston. I agreed and decided to come all the way from a small town in Georgia, all the way to the city, Boston. “I promise you Chris, you’ll love it here.” he said. Chris was his pet name for me. I rolled my eyes and Kyle waved down a taxi. We put my bags in the trunk and got in the cab. “You excited to meet your new roommates’?” “Uh, sure. I’m excited to live with five guys.” I joked. Kyle hugged me. “I’m so glad you’re here. Now, we have to do a little something for your graduation, since I had to miss it. Speaking of that, I need my photographs.” “No, that’s okay. Seeing you is enough. And, here they are.” I said and handed him my graduation pictures. “You looked beautiful. I wanted to be their so bad…” “Kyle, it’s okay man.” “Well, tomorrow night, we’ll make up for it.” “No Kyle, it’s fine geese, drop it.” “No really Chris, the band is playing at a club tomorrow night, your coming and we’ll party like old times okay?” “If you insist.” I agreed. Kyle always won an argument, mainly cause I let him. We pulled up to a beautiful house. “Ok, this is it.” he said and we got out. He got my bags and paid the cab driver. “Kyle it’s beautiful.” “Yeah, I know. But don’t be fooled by the outside.” he laughed and we walked in. Kyle took me upstairs to a gigantic room. “This is your room.” he said and sat my bags down. “Uh, it’s a little big, don’t you think?” “Ah, you’ll be okay. It’s good to have a big room. Well, at least you have a room.” “What are you talkin’ about?” “I live in the basement.” he said it serious too. I was shocked! “Kyle Patrick, if your lyin’ to me.” “I‘m not kidding. I live in the basement.” “Your lyin’ Kyle Patrick. I see it in your eyes.” I laughed. “Your to smart for your own good. I’m right down the hall. Oh yeah, good luck cause your right across from Joey.” I nodded. “Well, introduce me to the guys and show me around.” I suggested. “Follow me.” he said and gave me the grand tour of the house. Kyle was right, don’t be fooled by the outside. It was a mess in that house but it was like a mansion, or to me. I’ve never seen anything like that. Then he took me into the backyard were the guys were. “Hey guys, here she is.” Kyle yelled and a blonde guy ran over to me. “Finally Kyle will be quite. He about drove us crazy talking about you and he sure didn’t lie when he said you were beautiful. I’m Ben Romans.” he held out his hand. I blushed and smiled and shook Ben’s hand. “Christy Valentine.” I said. “And she’s even more country than you Kyle. And she’s got dimples. Beautiful eyes, smile, teeth…and I’m not the shortest one in the house anymore. No offence or anything. How tall are you?” “Thanks. And I’m 5’3.” “That’s okay….” “Ok Ben, enough.” Kyle said laughing. Then everyone else came over and introduced themselves. Joe was really nice and quite. Ethan was cute and funny. Ben, I liked him. I liked all the guys, they were nice but for one. His name was Joey Zehr. This message has been edited. Last edited by: Mrs. Joey Zehr™, |
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I absolutely LOVE it! its really good, and i can't wait for you to post more!
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Chrystallllllllllllllllllll. I LOVE IT!!! MORE NOW!
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LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE! haha
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Thank you guys so much! Here is Chapter 2!
x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x*x* Chapter 2 Chapter 2. “Do you like it here so far?” Kyle asked coming in my new room. “Yeah, it’s okay.” I said hanging my clothes up. “I told you. So, tell me what you think of the guys. Go through each one.” “Ok. Ben, is very funny. He’s really nice and sweet. Ethan seems like he’s very interesting. Joe, he’s cute and quite. You are crazy.” “And Joey?” “Well, I just one question about him.” “Proceed.” he sat down on my bed and hugged my fluffy pillows. I laughed a little. “Joey what’s wrong with him? I haven’t even been here for five hours and he seems like he hates my guts. ” “Oh, Joey, just ignore him. He’s a nice guy once you get to know him. He done that to me when I first moved in here and now were friends. It’s like a little test. He’s testing you. He did it to me so, just overlook it. Besides, he’s the ‘king’ of the house.” he said and I nodded my head. “Ok, I’ll try.” I agreed and put my suitcases away. “So wanna come downstairs and chill with all of us?” “I suppose I can” “Ok, cool.” he grabbed my hand and we walked downstairs. “I brought her.” Kyle said sitting down on the couch. I sat next to him. “Your to pretty to stay up in that room.” Ben asked. “Thanks.” I laughed. “Ok so, Christy, we probably know everything about you cause of Kyle. But tell us about yourself.” Ethan said. I looked at all the guys and they had their eyes on me, but Joey’s. “Well, uh, what do you want to know?” “How old are you?” Ben asked. “Seventeen.” “What music do you like?” Joe asked me. “Rock. The Beatles are my favorite ba….” “Oh my god, I love you.” he hugged me. Everyone looked at Joe and me. “I have never seen Joe do that. Am I seeing this or am I dreaming?” Ethan whispered to Kyle. “Uh, goodnight guys.” he said and ran off upstairs. I laughed. “Ok, uh, how did you and Kyle meet?” Ethan asked. “I’ve known Kyle since I could remember. We lived next to each other so, we were constantly together so…yeah.” “Did you too ever date?” Ben asked. “Little personal Ben. Besides, it’s getting late. Come on Christy, tell everyone goodnight.” Kyle grabbed my hand and pulled me upstairs. I said goodnight to everyone. “Kyle man, what’s wrong?” “Sorry, they were getting personal.” “Well dang, I have to live with them, their know sooner or later.” “Yeah but, I like keeping stuff between me and you.” “Like our relationship? Kyle, it was a long time ago.” “Not that long. Look, let’s just keep it secretive ok?” “Ok fine.” I said. “Ok. Goodnight.” he said and kissed my cheek. “Goodnight.” I said and went in my room. I took a shower and crawled in bed. I woke up to the sun in my eyes. “Wake up.” I heard Kyle say and then started tickling me. He did this all the time back home. “Kyle Patrick, stop it! I don’t want to get up, this bed is comfy.” “Well, we got a lot to do today.” “Wow, this room is the cleanest room in the house. Maybe we can have her clean it for us.” Joey said walking in my room. “You can forget that.” I said. He walked out of the room. “Like I said Chris, ignore him. Now, clean up and get ready to go into the big city.” “Kyle, I don’t like…..” “Be ready in forty-five minuets.” he said and walked out. I groaned and got up. I picked out a pair of ripped jeans and my band t-shirt of Jimmy Eat World. I took a shower and actually for once did my hair. I walked down the stairs and Joey was sitting in the living room with Ben. “You are a living doll.” Ben said as I sat down. I laughed. Joey glared my way and looked the other direction. Couple things about Joey I knew. 1. Avoid him. 2. He’s really tall. 3. He’s got gorgeous eyes. 4. Apparently, I’m going through his dumb little ‘test’. 5. He’s king of the house. “I’ll be back, I forgot my cell phone.” Ben said and ran off. Me and the enemy, in the same room. He sighed. “Nice shirt.” he said looking my way. “Thanks.” I said and smiled. He didn’t smile back. ‘Overlook it Christy.’ I said to myself. “What’s a girl like you wearing a shirt like that though?” “Well, their one of my favorite bands. And what do you mean by a ‘girl like me’?” “Well, your from Georgia….” “And your point?” I said. He just looked away. ‘Did I blow it?’ “My point is, aren’t you supposed to be into country music? Your from Georgia. Got the thick southern accent. Get it?” “Just cause I’m from Georgia and cause I have a accent don’t mean I have to listen to country music. I hardly like it anyhow.” “Hm, are you a poser?” “What the fu….” “You guys ready to go?” Kyle asked running down the stairs. Joey turned the tv off and gave me a nasty look and walked out. “Everything okay?” he asked. “Well, apparently I’m a poser for wearing this shirt.” I said. “What did I tell you, just ignore it. Now come on, let’s go.” he said and grabbed my hand. All six of us piled in a van that was drove by Ben! I knew it cause the bumper sticker said ‘Caution: Mad Driver!’ I was stuck in the middle of Kyle and, my favorite person, Joey in the very back. Joe and Ethan sat in the two seats in front of us and Ben was up front all alone. “Kay kids, buckle it up now.” Ben said and we followed his instructions. He began backing out and then he slammed on the brakes which made everyone scream. “Shorty, get your butt up here.” he said and pointed to the seat next to him. I laughed at the expression on his face. It was priceless. I unbuckled and went to the passenger seat. “Much better, now we can continue our little tour of Boston.” he said and back out all the way this time. “Ben, if you kill my best friend, I’ll kill you.” Kyle warned. Ben smirked. “No worries my friend, she’s perfectly safe.” he said. We drove around the city for a while and it was cool, but I missed home. “Now, we shall do the rest of the tour on foot. Then we need to make our way to that club over their for the show tonight.” he parked the van and we got out. “Let’s split up into our groups. Joey and Kyle, take Shorty around town. The rest of us need to work out stuff. Meet you guys back in a an hour or so.” they said and ran off. “Ok, let’s take you shopping.” Kyle said and we began walking. “I don’t want to shop.” I said. Shopping was never my thing. “For your late graduation present. Dummy.” he said. He drug me in a shop with jewelry and dresses. “Your kidding right?” I stood in the middle of the store in disbelief. “Just pick something out for Kyle.” Joey said behind me. I looked up at him. “I don’t like dresses and jewelry and all this fancy stuff.” “Guys, Ben just called, they need me. I’ll see you all at the club. Joey, keep an eye on her. Chris, stick with Joey and pick out anything you want, ok by.” Kyle said and ran out. Great, now I have to shop with Joey. “Just buy something for Kyle so we can get out of here. Here, get this.” he said and threw me a black halter dress. It was really pretty, but it wasn’t me. “No thanks.” I threw it back at him, I refused to get it. Joey put it across his arm and continued walking behind me. I ignored him and looked at the rings bracelets and earrings. “Why are you following me?” “Cause Kyle told me to keep an eye on you.” “Well, just go do something.” I said, but he didn’t go. I looked at a pair of earrings that I thought were beautiful. “Want those?” Joey said looking at them too. “No.” I said and continued my search. Joey got one of the workers over their and got them out. “Joey, I don’t want them.” “To bad.” he said. I was getting madder and madder. He was obviously ‘testing’ me. He randomly picked out a ring and bracelet and went to the cashier. “Joey, I demand you to put those back now!” I screamed. He looked down at me. “Telling me what to do?” “God, your stubborn.” I said walking out of the store. Joey came out with all the stuff in a bag. “Here.” he shoved it at me. “Oh by the way, I’m not a stubborn as you.” he said walking down the crowded street. I fought my way through the people. “What’s that supposed to mean?” I said getting angry with him. He just looked on and completely ignored me. He went in a suit shop and I followed him. “Why are you following me?” he turned around. “Cause Kyle told me to stick with you.” I said. He picked up a suit that he must have ordered. We walked back into the fast paced city. “Why do you hate me?” I randomly asked. “I don’t hate you. I don’t even know anything about you. All I know is that your name is Christy.” he said and we walked in a club. “And I don’t know anything about you cause every time I try to talk to you, you ignore me.” I said. He looked down at me and never said a word “Did you find the stuff you wanted?” Kyle asked as he saw me and Joey. “Yeah, I did.” I said and Joey went behind the stage. “Everything okay?” he asked. “Yeah, um, thanks Kyle.” “No problem, sorry I had to leave like that. Did Joey treat you alright?” “I ignored him.” I said and sat down at the bar. “He’ll come around. He just likes doing this to people. Don’t take it personal. He’s the nicest guy you could ask for. Now, just get to know him.” Ben said sitting down next to me. “I try to. I want to but he ignores me.” “Your going through his test.” “Kyle told me.” “Alright then. No matter how hard he makes you mad, sad or whatever, don’t let it get to you. It’s just Joey.” “I’ll try.” I said and thought about everything. Maybe, I could come to like Joey? Or he could be my arch enemy forever. |
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joey has a "test" i'm not surprised,haha.
cute chapters,her and kyle getting together 'again'?? or her and joey? more soon:] |
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Alright, now U HAVE to post more! Im a big fan now! I can't wait for then next chapter!
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