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***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Location: that castle in the sky
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This is my first time posting a Fan Fic online and I really don't know what I'm writing.
All I know is that I'm bored and I want to do something. So, I'm sorry if you won't like it. LINKS TO THE CHAPTERS: Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three Chapter Four Chapter Five Chapter Six PROLOGUE The wind roared into my eats. I couldn't hear anything else but its violent blows. It was dark, I couldn't see anything until I saw a white figure, it was beautiful, it glowed in the pitch- black darkness, when everything was a whole lot clearer, I finally made out what the figure was. It was a man. A thought hit me, BAM! "Maybe it's my dad" I thought. I was walking towards him, but then, darkness started to take over again, I was scared, and just as I reached for him, he was gone. "DON'T LEAVE ME HERE." I screamed into the nothingness. And I heard a voice, it wasn't mine this time. "Sasha, wake up! It's late and you have to get to school." It was mom, I heard her coming up the stairs "Five more minutes mom. You just ruined a dream right now!" I said when I saw her holding my door open and waiting for me to get up. This message has been edited. Last edited by: princess PAIGE, |
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***ULTIMATE FAN*** Registered: 10 June 2008
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uhm sounds great
keep posting on , Paige.. actually there were many fanfics here and they've been updating, but im so lazy and get not much time to turn every pages over again to read, but i suppose that i can keep my eyes on every chapter of your story from the begining |
***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Location: that castle in the sky
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LOL.
thanks Jill. Hold on, I think I'll post the rest tonight. (or today, whichever. LOL) |
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***ULTIMATE FAN*** Registered: 10 June 2008
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okay lol
whenever u want hhaha, it doesnt matter |
***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Location: that castle in the sky
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CHAPTER ONE:
It was just a dream. And how could I even think of seeing the white figure as my dad? I never really saw him since.....I've never seen him. Mom never wanted to tell me anything about him either. But there's one thing I know and it's that he's out there somewhere. I came downstairs after I took a shower and I tied my hair in a messy ponytail. "Sash, it's almost your birthday, and I just wanted to know what you'd like." mom asked thoughtfully. "Honestly mom, I think I already have everything I could want. I just want to see dad" I know it sounds so easy, but for mom, it seemed like asking for the whole world or something. "Oh come on Sash, Do we have to go through this every year? I already told you, your dad....wouldn't like to see us" lame excuse. She came up with different excuses. "What do you think I am? Six? I've been hearing you talking to him on the phone!" by then, I've gone too far. I just took my seat and started eating breakfast. The both of us went quiet. I hated it when we fight. "Listen mom, I don't want us like this. You're the only family I've got and it sucks when we don't talk." I apologized. "Honey, I know it's hard for you, but it's hard for me too." mom smiled her usual sweet smile. After I finished eating, I said goodbye to her, picked my bag up, and went outside. I started to walk to school. I didn't know why exactly, but I didn't take the bus that day. Not long after, I arrived to school, a little bit more early than most of the people. I went to my locker and got my camera. I love photography. I was walking around the campus, taking pictures of random stuff. "Ow!" I girl squealed. "Sorry, Trixie." I just noticed that I stepped on someone's foot. And not just somebody, it was Trixie. She was the one of those girls that no one really likes and is still popular. "sorry? that's all? These are expensive shoes!" She started to talk about the shoes. "It's okay sash." Carrie interrupted before her best friend could say another word. (to trixie)"You shouldn't be so mean to her trix, she was my friend before." Carrie told Trixie in a whisper as she dragged her away. I know they though I couldn't hear. But hearing Carrie say that I was her friend sent chills up my spine, the past year seemed like eternity. |
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Students were starting to rush into the school and I decided to get ready for Math. I was reading something from a book while I was walking to the classroom,
*CRASH* a guy ran into me and didn't even bother to help me pick my things up. "Talk about rude! First, they bump into you and then leaves!" I was fussing as I started to pick my things up, when a guy in weird clothes and glasses with thick lenses came to help. "Thanks a lot....uhm, are you new here?" I asked "No, I've been in the same Math class as you since sixth grade." He replied, blushing. I should've been the one who was blushing. "Oh, my bad. What's your name again?" |
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***ULTIMATE FAN*** Registered: 10 June 2008
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wow it's so cool Paige.Sash is kinda characteristic ,i love that ...
i can hardly wait to see the next |
***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Registered: 07 April 2008
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nice.
cant wait for the next chap. ;D |
***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Location: that castle in the sky
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thanks guys.
I didn't get to finish the convo between sasha and the guy. I'll finish it and I'll get started with the next chap. |
***ULTIMATE FAN***![]() Location: that castle in the sky
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