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lol.
It's okay.

I'll post chapter two.
and I'll make it noticeable this time.
haha.

It was actually my bad.
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hahah let it pass

ive been waiting....*c*
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CHAPTER TWO

At Starbucks...
I was reading a magazine when...
"Hi Sasha, you told me to meet you here, right? Or maybe I was dreaming and you're thinking I'm a jerk." he said the first half really calmly, but the rest, he looked like he was going to run out of the room.
"I told you, and don't worry, even if I didn't tell you to come here, I'll ask you to sit with me anyway" I smiled.
He took the other seat.
"So I'm thinking you should get a new haircut." I asked hopefully.
"I'm no too sure about that."
"Don't worry, it's going to be great!" I told him encouragingly.
"okay, I just want you to know I trust you not to make me look more like a geek."
We sat and talked over stuff for a while.
"Hey Zeke! I barely see you here." A guy, about our age approached us.
"Hey!" Zeke answered.
"Sash, this is my cousin, Danny, and they're Tom, Dougie, and Harry." He was referring to the guys individually.
"Hi!" I said in my usual friendly tone.
"Really nice to meet you Sasha, but we really have to go. Band practice." Danny said.
And as they were walking away, I swear I saw Dougie glance back and flashed a smile at me, I smiled at him too.
"....They're really good, you should hear their music...Err, Sash? Hello?" Zeke waved his hand from left to right in front of my eyes.
"Wha-? oh yeah, right. Uh-huh." I said without thinking.
"never mind" Zeke snorted.
"You think Dougie's cute?" I asked him, again, not thinking about it.
"what? Sasha, in case you forgot, I don't think boys are cute. I'm a guy, sash." I said, chuckling.
"But based on how you looked...you were blushing and you kept staring at him. So I think I'll say no, he's not cute at all." He said sarcastically.
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nice.keep posting.
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thanks you guys.

It's people like you that make me want to write.
LOL.
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I picked out clothes and got contact lenses for Zeke when he was getting his haircut.
I didn't only plan a haircut for him, I really wanted to give him a make-over.
When his hair was done, I asked him to put on the clothes and the contacts that I got him.
Of course, he didn't didn't give in easily.
I had to persuade him, but I was always good at getting things my way.

"Oh-my-gawd!" I said by syllable.
"Are you sure it's you, Zeke? You don't look like you right now." I told him approvingly.
"Thanks, I owe you, BIGTIME." he gave me a friendly hug.
"I bet the girls at school will go crazy over you! Just promise me one thing..." I said seriously
"And what's that?" He asked
"When you're rich and famous, remember me." I said jokingly.
We laughed.
"I'll never forget you even if you didn't do all this for me anyway." He said
"Really?"
"Of course, you're the only person in school that made friends with me."
I nudged his ribs and we laughed again.
But I actually felt like a hero or something. He's a really great person, and I'm really happy I took the time to get to know him.
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you finally post it! yey! Big Grin btw, *dli jud cya masigo?*
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yeah I did.

*masigo man, kapoii lang tan-awn. LOL.*
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nice chapter? : ))

im getting confused.
i think you should write a whole chapter on a word document or something then post it, it gets confusing when there are a lot of parts.

btw, can you make it longer? Big Grin
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haha what a cute conversation,Paige.Keep it up !Wink