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now before i get started i would like to say something. im only posting this first chapter. my last fic (you want to make a memory) fell through cuz nobody read it or left any feedback. kinda sucks when u work hard on a story and nobody likes it. so yeah. im gonna post this first chapter and if this fic starts well then ill continue. but only if i get feedback and readers. Smiler now on to the chapter Smiler. oh and this starts with simple plan in the mix, but the click five is in it too. promise. lol Big GrinBig Grin

Chapter One-You're My Best Friend

It's two-thirty a.m. in the middle of nowhere and the bus is stopping.

Faye groans into her pillow. Why are they stopping now? In the middle of nowhere for God's sake. "Pattt!" she yells to the driver's seat up front. Pat, Simple Plan's best friend and computer wiz slash genius, gives her the finger from the front seat. She rolls her eyes and rolls off the couch. David comes stumbling from the bunk area, eyes half closed and mumbling a string of French. She still doesn't know french so she never knows what the boys are talking about when they go into a rant. It's frustrating really.

She pats David on the head when he flops down on the couch. "Pat, did the bus break down or something? It's the middle of nowhere and it's freezing!" Faye says after meeting Pat up at the front. He doesn't answer; instead he exits the bus and she follows. The bus hasn't exactly broken down there's just a flat tire.

By now all the boys are up and standing at the door. Pierre exits, shirtless and in just a pair of boxers. He comes over to Faye and stands behind her, grabbing her folded arms and rubbing them to keep them warm. Pat's examining the flat tire with a frown on his face. "Do we have a spare tire?" Pierre asks, a yawn following.

Faye jumps when her Blackberry vibrates in the pocket of her hoodie. She gently pulls away from Pierre and takes the phone out. She grins when she sees it's a text from her best friend in the whole world: Joey. Opening the text she smiles even wider to see that's he's greeted her with a goodmorning. The boys are now arguing about not having a spare tire and what not, but Faye ignores them and goes inside from the cold. She plops down on the comfy couch and sends a reply to Joey.

"It's almost three. Not time for a goodmorning. :]-faye"

It takes a few seconds but soon she gets another.

It's getting close to ten here. How's the tour going? And why are you awake at that hour?"

"The bus has a flat tire. Ugh. And now the boys are arguing about not having a spare tire. Lovely."

"Nice. Um....how's it going with Pierre? Everything good?"

Faye senses the hesitation in his question. Ever since she can remember Joey has had feelings for her. But she met Pierre in 2003, then met The Click Five three years later when Eric was still around and the band was getting big. She never harbored any type of feelings for Joey except friendship. Well, maybe at one time she felt something for him. But then they kissed and it just didn't feel right. She was with Pierre and still is to this day. That day with Joey just didn't have any kind of spark or life to it. There just wasn't anything special about it.

Now, though, after being away from home for so long she was missing her other band. Her other half. Mainly her best friend. After that day they became best of friends and they've always been there for each other no matter what country or state the other is in. She misses him a lot. After this tour is over she's going back to Alabama. Once Joey is done with tour he's coming to visit her and she couldn't more excited. Just a couple of more weeks for her and three more for him. Then they will finally see each other.

"Hey." Faye looks up and smiles when she sees Pierre. He's shivering so he sits next to her and grabs the blanket thrown haphazardly on the floor. She cuddles up underneath with him, cell phone laying on her knee. She hasn't replied to Joey's message yet, but she doesn't really know what to say.

She doesn't want to hurt his feelings by saying everything great and amazing. That would crush him. She knows he's still waiting for the day that she breaks it off with Pierre, but she doesn't want to tell Joey that everything's just okay. That would make him extremely happy and put the idea in his mind that things are rocky and will be ending soon.

She still hasn't learned to live with having two different worlds. Two different bands, two completely different sets of boys that she loves. Some day she'll get the best of it.

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so? what'dya think? like it hate it what? lol i need feedback to keep going lol. if i get awesome feedback on this chapter alone then ill keep going and hopefully feedback will keep coming :] btw this is set at the beginning of 2008. so its still winter lol but its gonna progress to summer soon enough lol

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i like it.
especially that two of my favorite bands are in it.
hope you continue.
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shut the fuck up elizabeth! i'm so excited for this! its awesome! gah its been forever since we talked! i missed ya!!
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more!more!more!

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holy shit simple plan and the click five in the same fic?

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like it
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Originally posted by .maggie[grabbed joe's stick shift].™:
shut the fuck up elizabeth! i'm so excited for this! its awesome! gah its been forever since we talked! i missed ya!!


maggie! haha. yes its been forever. lol. and i must say i love your pic of joe yep kinda nice lol.


anyways. glad to see i got some feedback. ill post tonight hopefully. see if i get more and i gotta get more of my room cleaned up before my parents get back home from fishing. ugh. it looks like a tornado hit it haha.
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not getting as much feedback as id like but theres enough to get this second chapter lol. hopefully you guys will like it and ill get ever MORE feedback. :] PLEASE!!! one more thing. i know SP is over seas right now and they probably were at the beginning of the year (im too lazy to look lol) and im just going to assume that click five was overseas at that time too. lol. but yeah were gonna pretend like SP has been in the states, and so on and so forth lol but if somebody wants to correct me with the locations of both bands at teh beginning of the year i would be happy to take note of that lol THANKS!! Smiler

Chapter Two-Questioning

A huge bump in the road woke Faye.

She yawns big and loud and forces her eyes open. Pierre is sleeping on the floor for some odd reason but she ignores him and steps over him. Her stomach is growling so she heads to the kitchen area to fix a bowl of cereal.

Her trip to the kitchen is cut short when her phone vibrates. She jumps at the tingly feeling and takes the phone out of her jacket. A huge grin takes over when she sees it from Joey again.

After the flat tire got fixed Faye had continued to text Joey. It's been a few hours since she fell asleep, the phone forgotten in her pocket and a new message waiting for her from him. "You never answered my question btw."

Smile gone she texts a reply.

"What question? We've been messaging for a while and I've answered all your questions hun. :["

When she doesn't get one back she frowns and checks to see what time the message was sent to her. Two hours ago. Hmm. She shrugs and stuffs the phone back into the pocket. She notices that Pat isn't the one driving anymore. One of the techies from their other bus that saved them is in the seat. He's bobbing his head to some music she can't hear. Smiling she opens the cereal cabinet and then proceeds to stuff her hand inside the box. Rice Krispies: her favorite.

She's kind of bored now as she sits at the small table. The blinds are down so she grabs the string and pulls it up. Bright sunlight nearly blinds her and she turns her head away fast. Groaning she rubs at her eyes and tries to get the purple spots to go away. The spots finally go way and she's able to see again.

Faye kicks her feet up on Pierre's shoulder and he doesn't even move. "Lazy ass." she snorts and crosses her ankles. He still doesn't move. Intead he snores and wipes away a drool line. Lovely. She laughs quietly and stuffs a handful of cereal in her mouth. She takes her phone out and lays it on the table.

"And there's a text message." Faye whispers, staring at the device. "Annnd NOW!" Nothing. "Snap, crackle, and pop there's a message! And GO!" Still nothing. "Dammit."

She continues to stare at it, stuffing cereal in her mouth and feet still propped on Pierre. She squints thinking that maybe if she does it hard enough a message will appear. Sure enough the phone lights up and vibrates at the same time. She drops the cereal box and snatches the phone up.

"What're you doing babe?"-Pie

She glares in Pierre's direction and sees him putting his phone down. "Pie, that's not funny. I'm waiting for a message from Joey." She shoves his shoulder and he rolls away. She starts to wonder when he woke up and noticed her giving the death glare to her own phone. She's pouting now and Pierre pokes his tongue out. He gets up and grabs the cereal box off the table. "Hey!"

"If you're waiting for a message from him then why are you staring at it so hard that it looks like you want it to blow up?" Faye doesn't even try to answer that because she didn't understand half of it.

She gets up and trys to take the box back. "Don't talk with your mouth full. I didn't even understand half of that." She reaches again, but since he's almost a foot taller he just raises his arm up so she has to jump. "Pierre, give me the cereal. Now." Pierre shakes his head and steps back, stumbling over a shoe. "Pie, give it. I'm hungry and you're eating my cereal. Give it!" She jumps on the couch and reaches for the box that's now just in her reach.

"Nope." Pierre shakes his head and runs for the back room. Faye jumps on his back and, while holding on with one arm, reaches for the cereal with the other. Pierre, laughing, drops the box but holds on to Faye as he slides through the open door to the back room.

Her phone lays abandoned on the table, lit up and vibrating. 1 New Message: From Joey


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Message Sent: To Faye

Joey leans back in his chair and sighs. It's two hours to showtime but he's relaxing for the moment. Sound check ended ten minutes ago and that's when he saw Faye's message. He didn't want to repeat the question but he wants to know how everything is with Pierre. He can't help it if he's a little desperate. Just a little.

"Hey man." Kyle says, walking into the dressing room. He claps Joey on the back and heads for the mirrors to fix his hair. "Did you hear back from Faye?"

Joey shrugs. "Yeah."

"And?"

"And what?"

"Pierre, French-Canadian rockstar ake Faye's handsome boyfriend that you despise." Kyle looks at Joey weird through the mirror. Joey shrugs again.

"Nothing. Just sent another message repeating that question. She never answered before."

"It'll be fine man." Kyle ruffles Joey's hair on the way to the door. "Just think, in three weeks we'll be home and you'll be on your way to Alabama to see her." Joey forces a smile onto his face before Kyle leaves. When he's gone, Joey frowns at the screen of his phone.

He doesn't think she's ever going to answer so he puts the phone away and gets up to leave.

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