hahahaaa! im on. but im not updating. just bumping this up cuz i seem to have lost some of my commenters...is that even a word? anyways.

yeah. bumping. now im going to bed cuz im dead tired from two little children....and i still have about a day and a half left with them...god.

goodbye and goodnight.
*ill update soon PROMISE! keep it alive!*

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haha, update soon!

im bacccckkkkkkk! woo. not really haha. anyways. so im gonna do an update...then my ass is going back to bed. yep. riley slept with me last night and he woke up several times and everytime he woke up he would start screaming his head off until he got what he wanted.....good god it was awful. and now im tired cuz we had to get up at 730 so we could get the kids up so they would have breakfast and be ready to go home in time. thank god they're gone. lol. anyways. thanks for the comments while i was away. sorry i didnt visit much. this is the second time ive been able to get on the computer since they were here. yep. sad i know. ha not really. anyways. heres an update.

Part 3
Day one


"66 bottles of beer on the wall, 66 bottles of beer, you take one down pass it around 65 bottles of beer on the wall!"

"Joey for the love of god and all that is good, shut the hell up."

"God, Ethan you're such a party pooper. You better be glad I don't turn this car around right now mister and drop you back off at home."

"Shut up, Joey."

"You guys better be glad I decided to shuttle us around to this lovely place. I could've made you walk but no. I'm a good friend."

"Joey."

"What?"

"Shut up."

Joey opens his mouth to say something else but instead closes it and stares ahead at the road. Ethan smiles to himself and sits back, enjoying the view outside the car. "You suck." Joey mumbles and slouches down a little in his seat.

"Turn some music on!" Ben suggests. Kyle, who's sitting in the passenger seat, nods and turns on the radio to 101.9. Rick and Bubba is on and they all cringe. "Turn it off!" Kyle gladly does so and turns the CD player on.

"How much longer until we get there?" Kyle asks as he changes song after song until he finally finds the one he's looking for. Joey shrugs and they all huff.

*****

Faye slaps a hand over her face and slides down in the passenger seat.

Another crayon flies past her head and hits the windshield. "Stop!" she shrieks and takes the crayons away from Emma and Riley. Emma starts to pout and Riley leans back against the seat with his arms crossed. "Thank you."

"Babe, chill. We're almost there, so you can relax." Pierre places a hand on her thigh and she smiles.

"I know, I know. I just can't wait to get in that hottub and just...relax." She laughs and sits up, adjusting the seatbelt.

The rest of the ride is silent, except for the occasional chatter between Emma and Riley. Soon enough the cabin comes into view and Pierre's turning into the long driveway. Faye is bouncing in her seat, excitement starting to bubble over. Pierre pulls the car in front of the garage and cuts it off. Emma, Riley, and Faye are out and running up the sidewalk. The Accadia pulls up next to Pierre's car and five boys file out and start hauling luggage to the door.

Faye digs the hidden key out from under the potted plant and unlocks the door. She steps in and grins. The cabin is beautiful. The front room is covered in famous paintings. An archway leads into the living room that could hold at least fifty people. Stairs to the right lead up to the bedrooms and bathrooms along with an entertainment room. A door to the left leads to the huge kitchen and from the kitchen a door leads to the indoor pool and from there a covered porch that overlooks the lake and forest surrounding it. From the living room a door leads to the jacuzzi room and from there a courtyard with a tennis court, garden, and patio.

A collective gasp from the group interrupts Faye's admiring and she turns to see the others standing in the doorway with the luggage. They drop the bags and start to run around. Joey, Pierre, and the kids stay where they are, smiling. "We're here!" she squeals and takes off into the living room. She didn't think she'd be this excited to be here. But now that she's here she couldn't be happier to just get away with her friends and have some.

"This is awesome!"

Faye giggles at Kyles exclamation from the kitchen. Voices carry in that kitchen it's so big. She starts to head for the kitchen when she hears another car pull up. She hurries outside and sees Amanda and Megan getting out of Megan's car. Faye greets them with a hug and a smile and gets Joey and Pierre to carry their luggage. "Come on!" she says and grabs their hands. She leads them into the house and their jaws drop to the hardwood floor.

"Damnnn." Megan whistles and looks around at all the paintings and decorations. Amanda shrugs and takes her bag from Pierre. "Which room is ours?" Megan asks, grabbing her bag also.

"First room on the left." She points up the steps and the two girls run off. "GUYS!"

Four boys run into the main room, excitement in their eyes. "Yeah?" Ethan asks.

"Room assignments. Now, my parents room is off limits. Emma and Riley have their own room. Pierre and I have our own room. Amanda and Megan have arrived and they just went up to their room which is the first one on the left. That leaves three rooms. Two of the rooms have two beds and that leaves someone with their own room."

"I call it!" Joey shouts, hand raised in the air. Faye looks at him weird and continues on.

"So I guess that leaves the rest of you to decide who shares the last two rooms. Now, the four bathrooms. There's a bathroom in my room and my parents room. The other two are end of the hallway. Should be no trouble finding them. Anddd....GO!"

They all stand there, looking at her like she's stupid and she stomps her foot. They scramble around to get their bags and run off up the stairs. Joey and the kids follow them, shaking their heads. Faye laughs as she picks up her suitcase and heads for the stairs. Pierre follows closely and she reaches for his free hand. He takes it and she leads them into their room. They drop the suitcases and she envelops him in a hug.

"Mm. I'm still sleepy." she mumbles into his chest.

"Go to bed."

She pulls away fast. "Um NO! Time to go have fun!" She throws her suitcase on the bed and starts digging around for her swimsuit. She looks over her shoulder and he's still standing there. "Duh." He laughs and she sticks her tongue out.

There's a knock on the door and Pierre answers it. It's Joey and Ethan, heads stuck just inside the door. "We're all going swimming in that huge pool. Coming?" Ethan asks. Faye nods and holds up her one-piece, giving them a 'duh' look. Ethan laughs and yanks Joey out the door. She can hear them running down the stairs along with four more pairs of feet. There's a crash and a "Joey watch out!" before all goes silent.

"What the hell?" Faye runs out the door and downstairs. She stops, stares for a second, then bursts with laughter. Poor Joey is laying on the floor, one foot stuck under Ethan, the other underneath a small sidetable. Kyle and Ben are leaning against the kitchen door holding their sides in laughter. Joe's standing off to the side, hands in his pockets, shaking his head. "I don't want to know how that happened." she states and goes back upstairs.

Pierre is laughing too and she grins at him. "That was funny."

Faye rolls her eyes and goes to the bathroom.

*****

"Marco!" Ethan shouts.

There's no response. He huffs and swims around in the warm water, searching for his friends and the two girls. "Guys!" he whines, slapping the water. There's a snicker behind him and he stops. "I hear you!" he says excitedly and spins around. He hits someone in the arm and opens his eyes. It's Joey. "Ha!"

"Mannn." Joey whines and is about to go under when he stops, staring towards the door. Ethan, Ben , and Kyle stop too, eyes open wide.

Joey blinks, heart thudding fast in his chest as he watches Faye come over to the pool. She's dressed in her baby blue one-piece that's fitting in all the right places. But his attention quickly shifts when Pierre walks in behind her. Joey swims over to the side and smiles up at her. She waves then jogs off to the diving board. He turns and watches her cautiously step onto the board, tip-toe down the board, and stand there, staring at the water with her toes hanging off the edge. She bounces a little then jumps, landing in the water foot first. He watches her shoot to the bottom of the pool then swim to the surface.

"Hello people." she calls. Amanda and Megan wave from their spots on the pool steps. Joe isn't paying attention; his earbuds are stuffed into his ears and there's a magazine in his lap. The boys in the pool smile and wave.

Pierre jumps in at the deep end and swims up behind her. Joey pulls himself out of the pool and sits there with his feet dangling in the water. He avoids watching the two of them as they come closer to the rest of the group. But his attention is quickly drawn back when Faye swims over and rests her arms next to him. He smiles and she frowns. "You okay?" she asks quietly. He nods and can tell that she doesn't believe him.

"I'm fine really. Go swim." He shoos her off but she doesn't budge.

"Hey, how about we all get Joe to grill us lunch today? The parentals were suppose to be leaving some grillin' food in there last night."

Joey nods again and smiles. "Sounds good."

"You sure you're okay?"

"Mhm."

Faye grins and slides back into the pool. She grabs his ankles and his eyes widen. He plants his hands on the edge of the pool and holds on. She tugs and manages to get most of him in the water. "Joeyyy, come swim with me!" She tickles his sides and he immediately lets go of the edge. He lands in the water and gets a mouthful. When he comes up spluttering he sees her swimming away, laughing.

For three hours they swim. Joe eventually puts away his magazine and music and heads through the house to get to the patio. While he starts the grill up, everyone else changes into warm clothes and starts getting things ready for lunch. "KIDS! GET DOWN HERE AND HELP!" Faye shouts from the bottom of the stairs.

Riley runs down the steps at full speed and Emma follows up slowly. Faye ushers them into the kitchen with the guys and girls. Emma starts to protest but when she sees Ethan she shuts her mouth and latches on to him. Faye holds back a laugh and puts Riley to work with the plates and utensils. She stops for a second and looks around the kitchen.

She smiles and thinks that this just might turn out to be an amazing vacation.

***
ew i didnt like this part. lol. probably cuz im sleepy. ugh. anyways. comments? please and thank you? lol

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You're a very talented writer! Great job!

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This was awesome! Loved it!

yay for new update!
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you're one hell of a writer.

dont worry about the comments, there are really some people who read but dont comment because of laziness.